Senin, 06 Januari 2014



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          Some people should used bicycles because bicycles health you body and one of sport get good health for your body and free global warming. Once of year I saw grandmother by bicycle in road a way and she always used cycle to work with his seller, I saw him smile in people with him bicycle. Bicycle don’t make pollution and parking place can find. The city must not allow problem to get worse. People should ride bicycle to work and school and enjoy the health benefit. bicycle also reduce road congestion.
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  1. Unknown6 Januari 2014 pukul 18.54

    i think your paragraph is to simple, but it will be better you explain more about the topic and generate your ideas large. you should give the conclusion in your paragraph....
    "because bicycles health you body and one of sport get good health for your body and free global warming",in this sentences there are some errors grammatical, and too much , you use the conjunction " and",thank you....^_^

    BalasHapus
  2. Unknown7 Januari 2014 pukul 18.36

    i think your paragraph is too short,, so you must explain more specific abaut the general statement

    BalasHapus

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