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My Beloved Parents
My parents is important my life. Their always give me love, keep
me, poison, guide me. They are everything for me and they are motivation for my life and spirit. My
mother is a person attention and ever to guide for me, give me love, as I’m
sick my mother always took care of me with his love. My father always worked hard to
provide the needs for me to enjoy life
moment by moment, day after day, year in and out, drop by drop sweat tireless
work though the
sun is so hot but what am I doing after my parents doing for me, sometime I don’t
listen advise me what are their say but they always apologize me. Sometime I think what
are I doing to my parents is mistake. I remember while them smiling my heart is
very happy. I want look my parents always smiling and I want my parents proud of me for my
efforts and also the efforts they
have educated me to
be like a child better.So, my mom and dad you are is
the best for my life and I can’t forget all sacrifice for them and I love
mom and dad thank you so much ,you have give me of love.
the tittle was wrong, ( my parets) . u must change that become (parent)
BalasHapusthanks you erna
BalasHapusDely, your sentence " Their always give me love....." the subject is false. You should use "they"
BalasHapus:)
My parent (father or mother) parents (both of them)
BalasHapusThere are some grammatical errors in your writing...
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My parents (are) is important (in) my life.
Their (they) always give me love, keep me, poison (passion),
My mother is a (attentive) person and guide(s) me, give(s) me love, (when) I’m sick my mother always (takes) care of me with his love. My father always work(s) hard to provide the needs for me to enjoy life moment by moment, day after day, year in and out (what?), drop by drop sweat tireless work though (?) the sun is so hot (what do you mean) but what am I doing after my parents doing for me, sometime I don’t listen (advice) me what (they) say but they always apologize me. Sometime I think what are I doing to my parents is mistake. I remember (their smile) that makes my heart very happy. I want (to see) my parents always smile and I want my parents proud of me for my efforts and also the efforts they have educated me to be a (better) child. (This doesn't conclude your paragraph) So, my mom and dad you are is the best for my life and I can’t forget all sacrifice for them and I love mom and dad thank you so much ,you have give me of love.
actually I wanna give comment,but Mr.Sandi have already explained clearly
BalasHapus(same with Mr.Sandi's explanation..hehe)